Score: 7

"Just like the spam says, longer IS better"

submission: Sonata in Scarf Major

date: June 12, 2008

Loved the concept, was sorry to see it end so quickly.
Animate the level transition screens--each time I passed a level, I thought the game had frozen.
Have you thought about making the scarf controllable? It was really hard to get enemies who were below you (enemy is period, you are asterisk)
--_._--*

Score: 1

"glitchy"

submission: -Stick Fight-

date: June 10, 2008

I clicked the movie at the beginning and everything turned black, only visible when it moved.
You should fix that in v2

Score: 8

"Fun...but a bit slow"

submission: Dungeon Crawler

date: May 20, 2008

I love the concept!
But there should be a way to skip the narrating and get right to the choices. I die a lot, and it's annoying to have to listen to EVERYthing over and over again.
Good replay value.
Maybe there should also be a bookmark function, so that you can choose to reload your last choice if it leads to your death. Because, we ALL kept our finger in the previous page of a choose-your-own-adventure book, and we'd still like to do it online :o)

Score: 7

"Make it better!"

submission: Oh No Spiders!

date: May 6, 2008

I like the concept, but it needs some tweaking.
For instance, you should be able to walk backwards and fire, instead of wasting precious time turning around all over the place.
Good, but take it down, fix some stuff, and resubmit :o)

Score: 1

"Come back for more"

submission: tank training 3

date: May 5, 2008

Good concept, but needs a lot of work.
For instance, "Instructions" is spelled with a C, not a V.
Also, how the heck do you beat the second level?
There should be a "previous shot" record that shows the path of your last shot, the power used, etc. The power metre should somehow be easier to adjust, as well.
Resubmit when more work's been done!

Score: 7

"Intriguing"

submission: Stratosphere

date: May 4, 2008

I don't understand the parallel between the leaves and the feathers...the supernatural is better than nature, perhaps? And those bells....
I think that the real picture of the cloudy sky is distracting, because everything else is animated. Maybe change that

Score: 7

"I love that band"

submission: Daft Punk Typography

date: May 4, 2008

Too bad I didn't see this "under judgement" because I could've gotten my first save! The one criticism I would have is the "Better" word at the end. For some reason, that textured text with a little bling just totally failed for me. I don't think it fits with the rest of the texts, or the message of the song.
Loved the almost subconscious effect of blinking, sliding text, though. And I would agree with that other guy that slowly adding colour would be good--but not too much!

Score: 3

"needs some spice"

submission: firdge : storyboard

date: April 28, 2008

This could be turned into a funny or scary short, but it has no sound and the framerate is terrible. (Might also consider adding colour)
Try resubmitting when it's complete. Until then, I don't think it's newgrounds material.