Score: 1

":o("

submission: Jump For The Ball

date: May 5, 2008

The only reason I rated this a 1 instead of a 0 is because of the song (which I enjoy).
I waited for 3.5mb to load and thought, "Oh, a good, quality, full-length flash!" and I was disappointed.
However, I really liked the animation style, and I hope you do something longer and more interesting. But as it is, I think it's not Newgrounds material.

Score: 6

"Not bad"

submission: Nanotube

date: May 4, 2008

I'm terrible at these sort of games, and I get fed up really easily...but I think yours belongs at Newgrounds!
The game occasionally lagged, though...don't know if that's my computer or what

Score: 7

"Intriguing"

submission: Stratosphere

date: May 4, 2008

I don't understand the parallel between the leaves and the feathers...the supernatural is better than nature, perhaps? And those bells....
I think that the real picture of the cloudy sky is distracting, because everything else is animated. Maybe change that

Score: 7

"I love that band"

submission: Daft Punk Typography

date: May 4, 2008

Too bad I didn't see this "under judgement" because I could've gotten my first save! The one criticism I would have is the "Better" word at the end. For some reason, that textured text with a little bling just totally failed for me. I don't think it fits with the rest of the texts, or the message of the song.
Loved the almost subconscious effect of blinking, sliding text, though. And I would agree with that other guy that slowly adding colour would be good--but not too much!

Score: 4

"Classical music suffers again"

submission: BuBBle Gum

date: May 4, 2008

It was a great animation, and good sound effects...but that song wasn't made up for 2001.

Score: 3

"Too cheatable"

submission: Mysteryville

date: April 29, 2008

You can just press tab to highlight where the items are...it might be better if you somehow disabled that....

Score: 10

"Amazing"

submission: Tri-achnid

date: April 29, 2008

One of the best games on the site (Tom agrees!)
I keep waiting for a sequel....will there ever be one?
A small tweak: it's sometimes hard to attach the webbing to the walls...maybe you could shoot web in the direction your active leg is pointed, and it would latch onto stuff?
I loved getting into a good walking pattern, and the music is superb.

Score: 7

"Good for procrastination"

submission: Cosmic Crush

date: April 29, 2008

I enjoyed it more than the similarly-styled "eat-a-fish" game. Contrary to some of the douches who've reviewed here, I thought the gravity was a fun bit, and getting out of there was tricky at times. I would also say that a radar of some type (maybe just little arrow/indicator at the edge of the screen pointing to where the remaining rocks smaller than you are) is necessary, because I occasionally spent a loooong time just hunting around for teeny-tiny pieces of space-rock.

Score: 3

"needs some spice"

submission: firdge : storyboard

date: April 28, 2008

This could be turned into a funny or scary short, but it has no sound and the framerate is terrible. (Might also consider adding colour)
Try resubmitting when it's complete. Until then, I don't think it's newgrounds material.