Score: 2

"Racist"

submission: Polygon Arena

date: June 23, 2008

Looks like a fun game, but since I have a laptop and I am right-handed, the controls make it very very difficult. My left hand just isn't coordinated enough to use a touchpad and click a button at the same time!
Any game in today's modern marketplace should have a WASD option.

Score: 7

"Too short, but much potential"

submission: Pirate Race

date: June 22, 2008

There needs to be more levels.
I was excited about getting to fully upgrade my ship, and then the game ended!
Maybe there could also be varying levels of difficulty, or a randomly generated free roam map (get gold for finding it and killing other pirates). You could paddle around in circles and have epic cannon battles!

Score: 6

"Cowboys and Zombies"

submission: Bounty Killers

date: June 20, 2008

Made a pretty good knockoff of Boxhead
But maybe you should try working on some original concepts.
It's obvious you've got the mechanics and art down!

Score: 3

"Every writer's best friend..."

submission: Landfill and Polution

date: June 20, 2008

...is a dictionary.
Pollution has two L's
That's the only thing I could think the whole movie.
Fix it.

Score: 7

"Just like the spam says, longer IS better"

submission: Sonata in Scarf Major

date: June 12, 2008

Loved the concept, was sorry to see it end so quickly.
Animate the level transition screens--each time I passed a level, I thought the game had frozen.
Have you thought about making the scarf controllable? It was really hard to get enemies who were below you (enemy is period, you are asterisk)
--_._--*

Score: 1

"glitchy"

submission: -Stick Fight-

date: June 10, 2008

I clicked the movie at the beginning and everything turned black, only visible when it moved.
You should fix that in v2

Score: 8

"In response to Kanti"

submission: Temple Guardian 2

date: June 3, 2008

Great flash, makes me remember the days when I had a PC instead of a 360 and could play good RTS
Kanti is the typical kid, and his problem is one that I myself had to overcome. When first playing the game, I skipped the tutorials so that I could "get to the action." However, I accidentally read one of the tut screens, and was surprised to find that yes, they DID actually help you understand how to play!
Thanks for the succinct explanations and a solid contribution :o)

Score: 4

"One improvement"

submission: mongada 3

date: May 21, 2008

I think a timer with "par" times would definitely make this a lot better.

Score: 8

"Fun...but a bit slow"

submission: Dungeon Crawler

date: May 20, 2008

I love the concept!
But there should be a way to skip the narrating and get right to the choices. I die a lot, and it's annoying to have to listen to EVERYthing over and over again.
Good replay value.
Maybe there should also be a bookmark function, so that you can choose to reload your last choice if it leads to your death. Because, we ALL kept our finger in the previous page of a choose-your-own-adventure book, and we'd still like to do it online :o)

Score: 4

"As an english major, I could only sit and cry"

submission: Hansel & Gretel

date: May 12, 2008

Fun little story, but so many typos in the subtitles that it needs to be reworked. Really, if there weren't typos, I'd give this an 8, but man, it was inexcusable.